Urgent: Is it suitable to use this sentence in writing a Thank You Email?

by admin on April 7, 2012

Question by Ex-Moon: Urgent: Is it suitable to use this sentence in writing a Thank You Email?
“Thank you for sharing your positive energy”. OR “Thank you for your inspiration and positive energy”.

I should write a thank you email to the interviewers. Honestly, they gave me a high doss of confidence. I want to write one of the 2 sentences above in the email but I am not sure if it’s professional to do so!!
Please your help…………………………………

Best answer:

Answer by LA2000
Sentence 2 with a change.

I would replace “positive energy” with the word “encouragement”. As in “Thank you for your inspiration and encouragement.”

“Positive energy” has a bit of a personal, “touch-y, feel-y,” new age sound. That is great if you are dealing with someone who looks at the world that way, but I am guessing you probably don’t know them well enough to know that.

Keep it simple. Keep it professional. Write the thank you that they would want their business to send. Professionalism, not emotion, is key.

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